简单的英语问题

This is Red Star Town.
My grandfather has lived here all his life. He met my grandmother here and they got married(结婚). Red Star Town was called Taping Village before. When the Red Star Town underground station was built，the government started to pull down the wooden houses in this area. Since June 2000，Taping Village has become a history.
My grandfather missed many things about Taping Village. (1)He used to be a doctor and everyone in the village knew him well. Now he is old and he can only sell medicine to people in the hospital. In the past, there were many stone and wooden houses around here. Also，there were big trees in the village. (2)现在到处是高楼。The streets are wide and clean. There are all kinds of shops and you can buy anything you want easily.
My grandfather is glad that life has improved so much，but he really misses everything in the past and feels lonely. Many of his friends moved away because the government let them live in new flats in new towns. Although the village has disappeared, it is still beautiful in his heart. 12. When did Taping Village become Red Star Town? 我知道答案 请大侠用专业的介词开头。。在下不会。。

1.As a used-to doctor, everyone knew him very well.
2.The over-sky buliding are laying there and there.
这两句我改了一下围了让介词开头我倒装了下。改变了语句顺序，你看看合心意么。
要该就叫我。。
望采纳谢谢。

有错，不应该这样说。如果要说”我的工作需要英语 或我用英语工作“的话，应该是：my work needs english. 我很担心我女儿会遇到坏人. i am worried that my daughter will meet bad guys.

During June 2000, Taping Village became Red Star Town as the construction of the underground station caused the wooden houses to be pulled down and thus, everyone there had to move. 不知道对不对 你看看怎样修改

这是红星镇。 我的祖父已经在这里住了一辈子。他遇到了我的祖母在这里,他们结婚了(结婚)。红星城名叫录制之前村。当红星镇地下车站建于,政府开始拉木,这一地区的房屋。2000年6月以来,录制村已成为历史。 我的祖父错过很多东西录制村。(1)他曾是一名医生和村里的每个人都知道他。现在他是老了,他只能卖药人在医院里。在过去,有许多石头和木制房屋在这里。同样,有大的树木在村里。(2)现在到处是高楼,街道宽,清洁。有各种各样的商店,你可以买到任何你想要容易。 我的祖父是高兴的生活提高了这么多,但他真的很想念过去的一切,感到孤独。他的许多朋友搬走了,因为政府让他们住在新公寓在新城镇。尽管村庄已经消失了,这是在他心中依然美丽。12。什么时候成为红星录制村庄城镇吗?