帮我看看这几个英语句子有没有错误

I’m Lihua. I comes form china.

I stayed in your hotle in England this summer vacation.

Since I left my room to airport the last day in a hurry.

I forget to take my camera with me.

Until I went home, I found i had forget it.

这五句有错误吗 帮我看看

1.不应该用comes.因为这是第一人称.

Hi! This is Lihua and i come from China.

I had stayed in your hotle this summer when i took my vacation in England.

But since I left your hotel so hurry to catch my flight that I forgot to take my camera with me, which i realized when I got home.

应该是：i come from china

i have forgot to took my camera