佛山一中英语协会上周举行了 “My dream house”的设计比赛，你们小组的作品获得了一等奖。现邀请你们在颁奖典礼上用英语介绍你们的作品。请根据以下提示写一篇5句话作文。1、

佛山一中英语协会上周举行了 “My dream house”的设计比赛，你们小组的作品获得了一等奖。现邀请你们在颁奖典礼上用英语介绍你们的作品。请根据以下提示写一篇5句话作文。
1、我的梦中房子是坐落在森林里的漂亮小屋，周围有五颜六色的花。
2、小屋的中间有一个大厅，大厅的周围有厨房、卧室和洗手间。
3、二楼有我的书房, 在那我可以安静地看书，上网。
4、我的小屋很特别，因为在紧急情况下(in emergency)，它可以飞走，这样我们都会安全。
5、我爱我的小屋。我会考虑更多的细节使它完美。My dream house is a beautiful cottage located/which is located in a forest, with colorful flowers around it. In the middle of the cottage there is a big hall, and around it there is a kitchen, a bedroom and a washroom. On the second floor is my study, in which/where I can read books quietly and surf the Internet. My cottage is very special because in emergency, it can fly away so that we will be safe. I love my cottage and I will consider more detail(s) in order to make it perfect.

(答案→)My dream house is a beautiful cottage located/which is located in a forest, with colorful flowers around it. In the middle of the cottage there is a big hall, and around it there is a kitchen, a bedroom and a washroom. On the second floor is my study, in which/where I can read books quietly and surf the Internet. My cottage is very special because in emergency, it can fly away so that we will be safe. I love my cottage and I will consider more detail(s) in order to make it perfect. 解析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

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