smoke 的短文改错

As we all konw it , smoking is very harmful to our health.

For us teenagers it does greatly harm not only to our health

but also to our mind. Now more and more peoples begin to

realize its harm. Many people over the world had given up

smoking. So some middle school students have formed the

bad habit of smoking. It's bad for their health and study.

we middle school students are the future builder of our

country.We should work moer hard and learn something

useful for our country, the people and ourselves,either.

It's time for them get rid of the bad habit of smoking.

每行都有一个错

As we all konw it （去掉）, smoking is very harmful to our health.

For us teenagers it does greatly（GREAT） harm not only to our health

but also to our mind. Now more and more peoples（PEOPLE） begin to

realize its harm. Many people over the world had（HAVE ） given up

smoking. So（BUT） some middle school students have formed the

bad habit of smoking. It's bad for their health and study.

we middle school students are the future builder （BUILDERS）of our

country.We should work moer（去掉） hard and learn something

useful for our country, the people and ourselves,either（TOO）.

It's time for them （TO）get rid of the bad habit of smoking.

As we all konw it （去掉）, smoking is very harmful to our health.

For us teenagers it does greatly（great） harm not only to our health

but also to our mind. Now more and more peoples（people） begin to

realize its harm. Many people over the world had（have ） given up

smoking. So（while ) some middle school students have formed the

bad habit of smoking. It's bad for their health and study.

we middle school students are the future builder （builders）of our

country.We should work more（去掉） hard and learn something

useful for our country, the people and ourselves,either（too）.

It's time for them （to）get rid of the bad habit of smoking

As we all know( it 去掉), smoking is very harmful to our health.

For us teenagers it does great harm not only to our health

but also to our mind. Now more and more people begin to

realize its harm. Many people over the world have given up

smoking. But some middle school students have formed the

bad habit of smoking. It's bad for their health and study.

we middle school students are the future builders of our

country.We should work more hard and learn something

useful for our country, (the去掉） people and ourselves,either.

It's time for them to get rid of the bad habit of smoking.

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