英语作文 假如我是李华要参加英语演讲比赛，已经写好了演讲稿希望

英语作文 假如我是李华要参加英语演讲比赛，已经写好了演讲稿希望我校外教帮忙改稿

Yours ,
Li Hua

Dear Mr. Henry,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to ask you to do me a favour. Next month I’m going to participate in an English speech contest with the title My Favorite English Play. I’ve finished my speech draft , but I find it still far from satisfactory.
I’m not sure of the proper expressions of some English words. And there may also be some mistakes in grammar and sentence structures. Would you be so kind to improve my draft in the attachment? In addition, I’m wondering whether you can help me with my oral speech at your convenience.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me your guidance. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua