My favourite movie
Although there are many kinds of movies in the world, such as actions, comedies or dramas. But adventures and science fiction are always my favourite. The movie named Harry Potter is my favourite.
Harry Potter is also a novel. It’s written by J.K.Rowling. She is a single mother with a daughter. She is an English woman. She was born in 1966. She likes writing and telling stories.
Harry Potter has been adapted into a filmed by an English film producer. Daniel Radcliffe acts as Harry Potter. Rupert Crint acts as Ron, the best friend of Harry .Emma Watson acts as Hermione, the best friend of Harry.
There are Harry Potter one, two, three. But I like Harry Potter one best. Because it has many fantastic pieces, and magnificent places. It introduces many new things. Like Hongwarts, is an English boarding school for wizards. This school is full of magic. The stairs will change when they like to, the door is hidden, the apparitions waft around the school, and the pictures can move and speak. If you want to go back to your dormitory, you must cross a picture, and tell the right password to the characters in the picture. But, these are just a few parts of the film. There are more exciting pieces.
Although the characters are just children, but they acting is very good.
My favourite movie
我最喜愛的電影
Although there are many kinds of movies in the world, such as actions, comedies or dramas. But adventures and science fiction are always my favourite. The movie named Harry Potter is my favourite.
Harry Potter is also a novel. It’s written by J.K.Rowling. She is a single mother with a daughter. She is an English woman. She was born in 1966. She likes writing and telling stories.
雖然這世界上有許多種類型的電影，比如動作片、喜劇片或劇情片，但是我最喜愛的類型還是冒險片和科幻片。《哈利波特》是我的最愛，這部電影是根據J.K.Rowling的小說哈利波特改編。J.K.Rowling現在和她的女兒一起生活。她出生在1996年。她喜歡寫作和講故事。（這裡的英文句子有些不連貫，所以聽起來有些怪怪的。）
Harry Potter has been adapted into a filmed by an English film producer. Daniel Radcliffe acts as Harry Potter. Rupert Crint acts as Ron, the best friend of Harry .Emma Watson acts as Hermione, the best friend of Harry. （這裡是介紹哈利波特裏面的人物，如果需要的話，請追問。）
There are Harry Potter one, two, three. But I like Harry Potter one best. Because it has many fantastic pieces, and magnificent places. It introduces many new things. Like Hongwarts, is an English boarding school for wizards. This school is full of magic. The stairs will change when they like to, the door is hidden, the apparitions waft around the school, and the pictures can move and speak. If you want to go back to your dormitory, you must cross a picture, and tell the right password to the characters in the picture. But, these are just a few parts of the film. There are more exciting pieces.
哈利波特系列有3部，但是我最喜歡的是第一部，因為這一部里有許許多多美妙的劇情和震撼，詳細的場景。第一部也介紹了許多新的人物場景，如一所男巫住宿學校Hongwarts。這所學校充滿了魔法，比如樓梯可以自由變換，門可以隱藏自己，在牆上的畫可以隨意移動和說話。如果你想要回到宿舍，你必須說出正確的密碼告訴畫裡的人物並且穿過這幅畫。這些只是電影的一小部份，還有很多激動人心的片段。
Although the characters are just children, but they acting is very good.
雖然演員們都是孩子，但是他們的演技讓人稱讚。
（語法沒有多少錯誤，只是句子有一些不連貫而已。）