Mother's Day文章修改

Lily is a very clever girl .She likes her mother very much .

Last Sunday is Mother's Day .Lily got up very early . She

weared her new chothes. Later on she took her the whole

money to a flower shop.She bought many beautiful flowers

to her mother. She back to home quickly.When she back

to home,her mother was cooking lunch. She gave her

mother flowers,her mother was very happy and said''thank

you my dear daughter.''

Lily is a very clever girl .She loves her mother very much .Last Sunday is Mother's Day .Lily got up earlier. She wore her new chothes. and then she bought many beautiful flowers for her mother in a flower shop ,it took her all the money. She back home quickly.Her mother was cooking lunch when she back home. She gave her mother the flowers.Her mother was very happy and said''thank you ,my dear daughter.''

你的原文有些语病，并显得凌乱。我重新整理： my mother is a teacher.she teaches math in a school.she is busy every day.early in the morning she makes breakfast for me.she goes to work at 7:30am on her bike.she gives two lessons every day.she comes back home at 6:30pm and watches tv at 8:00pm.then she prepares the lessons for the nex憨埂封忌莩涣凤惟脯隶t day.she goes to bed at 10:00pm. 祝你进步