英语短文改错 一共十处错误 大小写 标点 拼写 顺序 这几项错误不用改

英语短文改错 一共十处错误 大小写 标点 拼写 顺序 这几项错误不用改
It was 9：20 that I got to the English Corner.Some were reading some papers and some talking while others were listening attentively.So I joined them in their talk.At the first,I was afraid that my English was so good that I couldn't follow them or make myself understood.I was also afraid someone might laugh at me.But a smiled face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease.I became bolder and came to speak English with them free.We talked about the situation at home and broad,about our school life,our hobbies and our ideas.We changed experiences in our studies with one another and share views,all in English.I learned a lot and made a lot of friends.

It was 9：20 that（when） I got to the English Corner.Some were reading some papers and some (加were) talking while others were listening attentively.So I joined them in their talk.At the（the去掉） first,I was afraid that my English was so good（poor/bad） that I couldn't follow them or(and) make myself understood.I was also afraid someone might laugh at me.But a smiled(smiling) face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease.I became bolder and came to speak English with them free(freely).We talked about the situation at home and broad(abroad),about our school life,our hobbies and our ideas.We changed (exchanged )experiences in our studies with one another and share(shared) views,all in English.I learned a lot and made a lot of friends.
再问： 连词or改成and有什么语法上的解释么？求教 这里bold用比较级是否合适
再答： 我觉得我的是有问题，楼上的说的在理。