My Friend A girl.She is very beautiful.She is o

My Friend A girl.She is very beautiful.She is o
My Friend
A girl.She is very beautiful.She is obedient and like to help others.She can sing and playing piano.She ateing appes.She like little animals.She like red .She is my best friend .Guess who is she
(本人自己写的,求学霸点评,哪里错误请指出来,写的好不好?)

再问： A 大写
再问： 写的怎么样？
再答： a小写
再问： 那个 My Friend是题目
再答：
再问： 一个女孩 啊
再答：
再问： 我写的怎么样？回答我
再答： 挺好的，不过有些错句