尋外語高手（英語達人）糾下錯（短文）

(1)The capital city of America,Washington D.C.(2)It's a very beautiful city and a big international city in the world.I think nobody don't know.America is very developed,there're three sessions olympic games in America .So you see ,it's really very powerful. (3)There's a basketball-team in Washington.It's remarkable talent ,but it isn't the best team in NBA.You should know ,Eurpean and Braslian soccer ball are very nice(in the world),and American basketball is the best.NBA is the best coalition in America and the world. (4)I like basketball very much,So, I'll see a person,this person is also a basketball player in the NBA,Allen.lverson.He's just has 183 cm,but his basketball is really very nice.he's a tragey hero,because he paid a lot,but no gains,and there's a Chinese word on his neck,it's"zhong(忠）",so you see,he is layal to his family,wife,basketball and team.(5)Why shall I go to America,there's another reason,because my favorite car is Lamborghini,it's the best sports car in the world to me,America is the richest country in the world,so,I think there're a lot of Lamborghini cars in American cities ad the streets. (6)I'll go to America when I get big.
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(1)The capital city of America,Washington D.C.(2)It's a very beautiful city and a big international city in the world.It's famous in the world ..America is a developed country,there're three sessions olympic games there .So you see ,it's very powerful. (3)There's a basketball-team in Washington.It's remarkable talent ,but it isn't the best team in NBA.You'd know ,Eurpean and Braslian soccer ball are very nice(in the world),and American basketball is the best.NBA is the best coalition in America and the world. (4)I like basketball very much,So, I'll see a person,this person is also a basketball player in the NBA,Allen.lverson.He's just 183 cm,but his basketball skills is really very nice.he's a tragey hero,because he paid a lot,but no gains,and there's a Chinese word on his neck,it's"zhong(忠）",so you see,he is layal to his family,wife,basketball and team.(5)Why shall I go to America?there's another reason,because my favorite car is Lamborghini,it's the best sports car in the world,and America is the richest country in the world,so,I think there're a lot of Lamborghini cars there (6)I'll go to America when I grow up...

Washington D.C,The capital city of America.

It's a very beautiful and a big international city in the world.As we all know,America is a developed country,there're three sessions olympic games there .it's very powerful

There's a basketball-team in Washington.It's remarkable talent ,but it isn't the best team in NBA.You know ,Eurpean and Braslian soccer ball are very nice(in the world),and American basketball is the best.NBA is the best coalition in America and even in the world

I like basketball very much,And I want to see a man who is also a basketball player in the NBA,Allen.lverson.He's only 183 cm tall ,but his basketball skills is really nice.And he's a tragey hero,because he paid a lot,but no gains,and there's a Chinese word on his neck,it's"zhong(忠）",this means he love his family,wife,basketball and team.

这篇文章的主题不是很明确。内容太散，而且句子很中国话，希望楼主多读些英文原版文章，对你很有帮助。

1)在美国首都华盛顿特区

2)这是世界上一个非常美丽的城市，一个大型的国际城市.我想没有人不知道.美国非常发达，有三届奥运会在美国.所以你看，她真的非常强大。

3)有一个篮球队在华盛顿。它的杰出的人才，但它不是在NBA最好的球队。

你应该知道，欧洲和Braslian足球都很好（世界），和美国篮球是最好的 NBA是美国最好的联盟在世界上 4）我喜欢篮球非常多，因此，我会看到一个人，这个人也是在NBA，篮球运动员艾伦。 lverson.他只拥有183厘米，但他的篮球真的是很不错的。 他是一个悲剧英雄，因为他付出了很多，但没有收益，并有一个脖子上挂着中国字，它的“忠（忠）”，所以你看，他是layal他的家人，妻子，篮球和团队 5）为什么我该赴美，还有一个原因，因为我最喜欢的车是兰博基尼，这是最好的体育世界各地的汽车给我，美国是世界上最富有的国家，所以，我认为是一个对兰博基尼汽车在美国的许多城市的广告的街道。 6 ）我将赴美当我长大后 顺便提一句，里头有几句出现了语法错误，而且还有些地方有点不知所云的，我也只是瞎猜，希望对你有用

(1)The capital city of America,Washington D.C.

(2)It's a very beautiful city and a big international city in the world.I think nobody doesn't know.America is very developed,and three sessions of the olympic games were hold in America .So you see ,it's really very powerful. (3)There's a basketball-team in Washington.It's remarkable and talented ,but it isn't the best one in NBA.You should know ,European and Brazilian soccer ball teams are very good(in the world),and American basketball teams are the best.NBA is the best coalition in America and even the world. (4)I like basketball very much,So, I'll refer to a person, Allen.lverson ,who is also a basketball player in the NBA,.He's just 183 cm,but his basketball skill is really very nice.He's a tragedy hero ,because he paid a lot,but no gains,and there's a Chinese word on his neck,it's"zhong(忠）",so you see,he is loyal to his family,wife,basketball and team.

(5)Why shall I go to America,there's another reason. My favorite car is Lamborghini,it's the best sports car in the world to me,America is the richest country in the world,so,I think there're a lot of Lamborghini cars in American cities and the streets.

(6)I'll go to America when I grow up. 按照我的理解改了下 顺便修改了一下没有错 但是很别扭的用法