英语口语考试自我介绍（能者进）？

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我的名字叫XX，来自XX省，是大一新生，我家里有3口人，我父亲是做生意的，我母亲是家庭主妇，我觉得我们的生活很幸福，我是一个性格比较热情的男孩，并且我有很多爱好，例如，篮球，乒乓球等体育运动，我觉得体育运动能够使我的身体素质变强，我还很喜欢上网，我很喜欢看一些网上的新闻，并且喜欢网上购物，虽然有时玩一些网络游戏，但是我并不会对其沉迷，因为我觉的我的自我控制能力比较强，在学习方面，我自认为还有一些不足，我希望在以后的学习生活中能够不断提高，不断进步

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My name is XX, I'm a freshman and I come from XX province.There're three members in my family.My father is a buisnessman and my mother is a housewife.We live a very happy life together.I'm an enthusiastic boy and have a lot of hobbies.Such as playing basketball and table tennis and so on .I think sports exercise can improve my physical quality.And I'm fond of surfing online,I like watching the news online as well as shoping online.Although sometimes I play some net games ,I will not indulge myself in it.Because I have strong ability in self-control.As for my learning ,I think I'm not doing well ,I hope I can make progresses step by step in the future in my learning process.

My name is XX, from the XX province, is a freshmen, I've got three people, my father was doing business, and my mother is a housewife, I feel that our life is very happy, I was a relatively warm personality boy, and I have many hobbies, such as basketball, table tennis and other sports, I think the sport can make me physically strong,I also like the Internet, I really like to see some online news, and the like online shopping, though sometimes play some online games, but I'm not obsessed with his, because I feel my self-control are relatively strong, in learning respect, I think there are some self-sufficient in the future I hope to learn in life will constantly improve and make progress