此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜

此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
　　该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
　　A warm - heart nurse on her first day’s work came to
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a patient. She asked him she could do anything for
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him, and he only waved his hands and said something
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she could hardly understand. She asked him again
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and he just kept saying the different words, but
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in a more lower voice, before closing his eyes. She
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felt his pulse and found him death. She rushed to
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repeat to the doctor sounds she had heard. “My
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dear girl,” said the doctor after listen carefully to
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what she repeats,“he was saying you’re standing on
my oxygen pipe.”
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warm-heart→warm-hearted. 　

(答案→)warm-heart→warm-hearted. 　 解析：　76.“形容词＋名词＋ed”构成复合形容词。77.if／whether意为“是否”，在此引导宾语从句。78表转折应使用but.79.正确80.由keep saying可推知。81.lower是low的比较级，所以不可再用more.“much＋比较级”意为“…的多”。82.find him dead意为“发现他死了”。83.sounds后接定语从句，表特指应带定冠词the.84.介词after后接动词-ing形式作宾语。时。85.讲述过去的情况应使用过去

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