I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1. 　　my childhood experien

I can’t swim because I have a strong fear of water. Look back 1.
　　my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might 2.
　　explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go 3.
　　near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a 4.
　　unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to 5.
　　see the water as something danger. Second, my eyes 6.
　　became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the 7.
　　water, I couldn’t see anything, or this increased my fear. 8.
　　The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw 9.
　　a neighbor drowned. After then I have been more frightened. 10. 　　

(答案→)　　 解析：1. 此处应该用现在分词作状语2. look back on / upon是固定短语,意为“回顾”3. 此处应该用被动语态。4. unreasonable fear是以元音音素开头,故用不定冠词an5. 此句是简单句,that是多余用词6. 形容词修饰复合不定代词7. 复数名词glasses意为“眼镜”8. 此处表达因果关系9. 本行无错10. 介词短语since then常与现在完成时态连用。

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