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You can know a lot about the person through the types of friends this person has?

It is universally believed that we can easily perceive one's personality through what type of friends he accompany with . However, i regard this as a superficial idea. From my perspective, we cannot rudely judge a person since different people have various criterion making friends.

To begin with, some people intend to making some friends that are can compensate their own personality's disadvantages. It is a informative saying that" No people is perfect". Although we should accept this fact, we can also engage in improving ourselves and be apt to the best person we could be. Making friends is a good way to achieve it. We can get acquainted with others virtue,such as dealing methods, helpful brainstorming, gracefully behaviors and so forth. Even though we have directly opposite personality, we can still become best friends since we can learning mutually. In this case , how could we determine one's personality from the others?

Second, Knowing that not two leaves are the same,even some people prefer to finding someone very similar to he/herself, we still can not judge their personalities. To demonstrate, Molly and i are best friends since we have many common aspects : we like hip-pop music; we take advantages in Math ; we go swimming frequently; we even have the same haircut. So much similarity so that our classmates can not figure out us sometimes. But, we all know that there still many distinctions between us. When confronting difficulties, i tend to lest it while she would like challenge herself. Also, when we cannot have agreement in an affair, i am always the one who first compromising. It is obviously that no people can be so similar as a copy. We cannot accord people a definition in term of their friends.

In addition, it is humorous people that almost everyone would like even they do not have this characteristic. Naturally, people prefer the one can bring enjoyment and owe them a colorful life, and it enhance the possibility that choosing these humorous people to become their friends. But could we determine that all people are humorous ? Just because they want to gain more happiness?

文章语言和组织上整体还ok，但是有这么几个地方我个人觉得应该注意一下。
1.第一段能用让步转折点明观点很好，但是，你不觉得有点别扭吗？人们普遍认可可以从朋友身上了解一个人，接着又说，你不同意这个观点。当然，你的观点下面有论证，但是，为什么那个肯定的观点得到大家认同呢？我的意思是，已在第一句说完后，紧跟着应该来一个细节。比如：毫无疑问，人们可以从一个人的朋友身上了解那个人，因为人们在选择朋友时会按照自己的习惯方式。后面那个因为不能省。我只是举个例子，可能不是很恰当，但意思就是那样。
2. 没有结尾啊亲。必须要总结全文并且再次点题。
3.其实我觉得你的论证思路有些窄。实际上这个命题我第一次看到是这样有一种思路，仅供参考：
可以通过一个人的朋友来了解这个人。我先想，这句话肯定是没问题的，比如退休的老人和小孩。老年人喜欢和有自己爱好的人一起出去，小孩也是。（这又有了分论点了，分别写老人。。。小孩。。）再想，是不是，所有人都是这样呢？不是的，因为有好多人喜欢和自己截然相反的人交朋友，比如你某个同学啊。。。所以结论是：不能说每个人都能通过朋友看出个性。是否能通过朋友了解一个人取决于那个人交友的原则和本人的性格。
希望继续交流