书面表达（10分）假如你是李华。这学期，你们班换了一个新英语老师（Miss Yan）。她年轻热情，有很多优点

书面表达（10分）假如你是李华。这学期，你们班换了一个新英语老师（Miss Yan）。她年轻热情，有很多优点。但是今天在课堂上她却让大家给她提出意见。于是大家纷纷发言，这不，还真提出了不少意见呢！请你根据下面的提示，给严老师写一封信，委婉地给她提些建议。80个单词左右。1.说话语速太快。2.作业有点儿多。3.有点儿严肃。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Dear Miss Yan,
I am glad to have a chance to write a letter to you. I like you very much because your classes are so interesting. But I want to give you some advice. First, you speak too quickly in class. Would you mind speaking more slowly? Then we can understand you better. Second, would you mind not giving us too much homework every day? If we spend too much time on homework, we won’t have time to relax ourselves. Last, I feel you are a little strict. I am a little afraid of you. Of course, you can still be strict with us in class, but after class we sould be friends, don’t you think so?


本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达，写作的话题为给新老师提出建议。具体内容包括建议信的格式，建议的内容包括老师说话语速太快，作业有点儿多，有点儿严肃，在写作时应注意使用委婉的语句，同时应注意语言的准确性和连贯性。

dear miss yan: we all love a new teacher who has been such a breath of fresh air. here are my suggestions for a passionate teacher who deserves like yourself. firstly, you might not notice, but if you could slow down when you speak, it would be of great help for us to understand what we learn better. do you know that homework is given to us from every other course everyday? so if you could reduce your homework for us, and at the same time be more playful at teaching, i sure it is not only our lives that you are making so much happier but yours as well! thank you for all your hard work. i look forward to your new teaching style. best regards, li hua 中心内容80字左右，客套50字左右（本人喜欢客套），所以你嫌多去掉客套话就是了。