求英语大神帮忙写一篇英语作文

Hello,everyone.Now please allow me to do an introduction.My name is Li Lei.I’m 14 year old.My birthday is on October 11th.My favourite book is twilight.I really love to read the books about vampires.My hobby is singing.Some people say I’m a good singer.My favourite singer is Justin Biber.I think he is a great singer.I love to sing his songs.Besides singing,I love shopping very much.If I have time,I will go shopping with my friends.I’m really good at English,if you have any questions,you can ask me,I will do my best to help you.We can be the best friends forever.Thank you.
大家好,现在请允许我做自我介绍.我的名字叫李蕾.我今年14岁了.我的生日在10月11日.我最喜欢的小说是暮光之城.我非常喜欢那些关于吸血鬼的书籍.我的爱好是唱歌.有人说我唱得很好听.我最喜欢的歌手是贾斯汀比伯.我认为他是个很棒的歌手.我很喜欢唱他的歌.除了唱歌,我还喜欢逛街.如果我有时间,我就会和朋友去逛街.我的英语很好,如果你有什么问题,你可以问我.我会尽我最大的努力帮助你.我们可以成为一生的好朋友.
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