Some traffic accident cause damage to some people lose money

Some traffic accident cause damage to some people lose money and the most of important is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people are lost in disturbing .this is very difficult .
Why why?
Make traffic accident reason :one .some people break down the traffic rules .they drive their car by their means .this is very wrong .two .some people drive their car as quickly as .so they across the road and street cannot make people fill with danger and make people injure three .some bored driver get drunk still drive their car to street.

Some traffic accidents cause damage to some people lose money and the most important thing is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people lost in disturbing .this is very difficult .
Why why?
there are some traffic accidents reason :first,some people break the traffic rules .they drive their car by their means .this is very bad to them .second,some people drive their car as fast as they can.so they across the road or street cannot make people in danger and make people injure last .some bored driver get drink still drive their car on the street.
你的错误还是蛮多的.自己写完后认真检查一下.不要犯基本错误.
你的错误：accident .可数名词.some +可数名词复数、不可数名词单数
make sb do sth.不是 make many people are lost .怎么会用be动词呢.
建议你写建议的时候不要用one two..之类的.我们老师说最好用first,second.之类的.
quickly和faet 的区别.fast:动作本身速度快.quickly：2个动作之间衔接的快.
好了.that is all.