My dream 初中英语作文 3分钟

My dream 初中英语作文 3分钟
My dream 的初中英语作文,内容要写出具体的做法,别太抽象了.
要求：千万不要有语病,单词初二左右的水平.
如果你的答案让我很满意,我绝对把悬赏升到100.
不好意思，刚才没说清楚，我要的是演讲稿，300个词左右。

my dream
hi,every one ,let me tell you something about my dream .
My father is an athlete,when i was young,he often taught me how to play basketball,So i became to fell in love with it
when i was 5
i practice playing basketball every day ,and i like watching NBA very much ,i think i can learn something from it,
Now i play basketball very well .Because I am working hard for this,and i believe that my dream can comg true ,
So ,every one ,let us fight for our dreams
thank you
纯手打哦,自己编的 ,不知楼主是否满意呢?,不满意我再改改
我是初三的,这么多应该可以把
再问： 字数太少了，至少也得要2、3分钟的。
再答： my dream
hello everyone! it is my great pleasure to share my dream with you today.
my dream is to become a teacher.
you know being a teacher is a thing that is very valuable and very interesting. i suggest that it must be a great fun to be with children all the day. and if i am a teacher, i can teach my students a lot of knowledge. they might become stronger and cleverer because of me. that is a very contented feeling.
china is a developing country. chinese are not that excellent in their intellegent. so teachers in china might be very very important. they can provide the society with a lot of successful people, and make china a better place.
do you think that i have a good dream？ i will work hard to make my dream become true!
thanks~
再问： 是的，300个词左右吧。
再答： 太多的发不上来，，有字数限制
给你链接
http://zhidao.baidu.com/question/282787733.html?qbl=relate_question_0&word=my%20dream%20%B3%F5%D6%D0%C9%FA%D1%DD%BD%B2%B8%E5
http://wenku.baidu.com/link?url=eiHxGwMzJXKmPwND87sVMbyTC2GszW0VC28wMPzxxRDi3LbupIHp6J_RTQSaCaEJREBsmc67P2ayCk60egH6BoajaHokRhVD2LrMZtgwAeu

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再问： 你回答的那篇想成为教师的还不错，再帮我修改修改，开头结尾加点优美句，中间删点单词比较难的句子，或者是换种表达，最后字数在300个左右就行了。
先谢谢你了。
再答： my dream 可以改一下i am happy to show my dream
开头句2（. Now I want to say something about my dream. What is my dream? I often
ask myself. In my mind, everyone shall have his own dream. I think that
having a dream means that we have an idea, and then we will do all the
things to achieve the target） my dream is to become a teacher.
you know being a teacher is a thing that is very valuable（有价值 and very interesting. i think being a kid must be very fun all the day. and if i am a teacher, i can teach my students a lot of knowledge. they might become stronger and cleverer because of me. that is a verywonderful feeling.
China is a developing country. . so teachers in china might be very important. they can provide the experience with a lot of successful people, and make china become a better place.
do you think that i have a good dream？Everyone ，let us fight for our dreams ，结尾发出号召，为梦想拼搏奋斗，还有难句子么
thanks~
这里有字数限制好烦啊

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