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The 2010 Shanghai Expo, which is scheduled to be held from May 1 to October 31, will bring consider
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The 2010 Shanghai Expo, which is scheduled to be held from May 1 to October 31, will bring considerable benefits to the development of China in many aspects,Firstly, to citizens of Shanghai, it’s a good opportunity to us to introduce our lovely homeland to foreigners and make Shanghai a more charming city. Secondly, to Shanghai, it’s a wonderful time to attract international companies to branch in Shanghai and this will promote the development of Shanghai’s economy standard. Thirdly, to China, it will close the ralationship with other countries. China’s status in the world will be higher As is outlined above, the 2010 Shanghai Expo will bring us a lot of benefits. And we are sure we can hold this international activity sucessfully. The future of Shanghai will be brighter and brighter .
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The 2010 Shanghai Expo, which is scheduled to be held from May 1 to October 31.Firstly,it’s a good opportunity to us to introduce our lovely homeland .Secondly, it’s a wonderful time to attract international companies to branch in Shanghai and this will promote the development of Shanghai’s economy standard. Thirdly,it will close the ralationship with other countries. the 2010 Shanghai Expo will bring us a lot of benefits.The future of Shanghai will be brighter and brighter .