The 2009th Olypic Games was held in the capital of China - Beijing in 2008.All of Chinese people were looking forwards to it .Because we had never held it before .As a great many people would be visiting the country -- especially Beijing.The govrnment had built an immense stadium,a Olypic-standard swimming pool.A famouse designer had designed them.
During the Olypic Games , many Chinese players got the good mark,because they have trained hard for years. They are the heros in my heart.
才初一，写的不好，大家帮忙修改一下，谢谢啦。
The 2009th Olypic Games was held in the capital of China - Beijing in 2008. All Chinese people looked forward to it .Because we had never held it before .As a great many people would be visiting the country -- especially Beijing.The govrnment had built an immense stadium,a Olypic-standard swimming pool.A famouse designer had designed them.
During the Olypic Games , many Chinese players got the good marks,because they have trained hard for several years. They are heros in my heart.
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all
adj.
全部的, 所有的, 整个的
all of
adv.
实足, 不少于