I’m ×××，a student in my third year of university,

I’m ×××，a student in my third year of university, studying Business English. 请问这句话有错误吗？

语法错误倒是没有，但是不够地道。
建议改成：
I'm ×××, a junior majoring in Business English at university.

为您解答： 1 you are a newcomer,aren't you? 你是大一新生，对吧？ 2 what year are you in? 你读大学几年级了？ 3 i'm in my third year. 我读大三了。 4 i'm in my fourth year. 我读大四了。