有几个英语句子，请高手看看语法对不对

1.one person’s power can not change the bad circumstance of the entire countr.

2.Henry indicates that Dorian’s beauty can not last forever, and persuades him to enjoy the earthly pleasure.

1.one person’s power cannot change the bad circumstance of the entire country.

2.Henry indicates that Dorian’s beauty cannot last forever (没有逗号）and persuades him to enjoy the earthly pleasure.

can not = cannot 两者都可以使用，但后者比较常用。

楼主，

They have an original pattern or model which appears before called archetype 内的

appear 是指“出现”？很像中式英文，直接翻译。

建议：

They have introduced an original pattern or model (before) which is called archetype.

before 可以不用放。

1.没问题  counter估计是手误把

2.也没问题 最后个词组是好词组啊

不错啊