麻烦帮忙将下面一段英语的语法有错误的地方修改一下

麻烦帮忙将下面一段英语的语法有错误的地方修改一下
Today,very pleased to be able to introduceTaiwan,I will bring you a brief taste of something.My name is Evan,come fromdepartment of geology.The background picture is in the heart of Taipei's Xinyi District
First,to introduce Taipei.in the picture you can see the 101,it was the tallest building in Taiwan.not only have the world's fastest elevators,but also a super-large winddamping.This is the Taipei City Government,which is open to the public.Nextis my favorite bookstore - Eslite bookstore,there are very,very many books,and there are all sorts of people come here,or reading,or rest,or exchangesand discussions.

Today,I'm very pleased to introduceTaiwan to you.I will show you a brief taste of something.My name is Evan.I come from the department of geology.The background of the picture is in the heart of Taipei's Xinyi District
First,let's look at Taipei.It's in the picture where you can see the 101.It was the tallest building in Taiwan.Not only has it the fastest elevators in our world,but also a super-large wind-damping.This is the government of Taipei,which is openning to the public.Next,look at my favorite bookstore,Eslite bookstore.It has so many books that all sorts of people come here to read,rest,exchange their opinions or discuss with each other.