求解英语改错提

the more he wrote the less poetic he became这句话哪里错了

应该是：the more he wrote (,) the less poetic he became

我觉得应该这样the more he wrote, less poetic he became.意思是：他写的东西越多，（文笔）越缺乏诗意。

the more意为他写的东西越多，是名词，是wrote的宾语。并不是形容词的比较级结构，所以整个句子不是用的（the+形容词比较级，the+形容词比较级的）这个结构。

后面poetic这个形容词的比较级不需要加the

把poetic放在became的后面    

The + 比较级+主语+谓语，the + 比较级+主语+谓语

我觉得不能用less修饰后面那个形容词..

the more he wrote the less poetic he (become)