关于你朋友的英语作文,80词左右,初二第三单元

关于你朋友的英语作文,80词左右,初二第三单元

last weekend we went to shanghai with my classmates for holiday.we took a bus to shanghai.the weather in shanghai was sunny.in the morning,we went to the bund.some students played beach volleyball,some students played in the sea,others lay on th beach.after that we went to a restaurant for lunch.in the afternoon,we went to a shop and bought some souvenirs.in the evening,we took the bus back.all of us were feel very tired but happy.
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I heard you have some trouble learning English so I want to give you some advice.First,you should listen to teachers carefully in the class.It's important for you to study well what your teacher telled you.Second,taking much listening pratice.It's not important for you to understand each world .Third,grammar is an important part of learning English,taking notes in class and review them ai home,I think you will make much progress soon.Finally,never give up I believe you can study English well.As a saying goes “There is a will,there is a way.”